Comments : Until I Vanish

  • 13 years ago

    by Loosened Locks

    Yeah, that's definitely depressing - Like being on autopilot - wandering aimlessly and lost .. Pretty heavy- I really liked the the descending moon aspect, it's so sad!

    • 13 years ago

      by HappieMappie

      Thank you. Yeah, I kind of have a dark and sad mind when I write. I'm a little weird. But thank you for your comment. I'm glad you liked it! :]

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Wow. That's.. intense.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Short but intense

    this really shows depth in the poet in you....wanting to vanish with the moon.....beautifully tragic....but remembrr the moon doeant really vanish...... just exists somewhere else.....

    Good poem :)