Comments : The monster i've created

  • 9 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Wow, I love this poem. It is amazing and had such great emotion. Amazing Job

  • 9 years ago

    by aisyned

    Thank you very much!:)

  • 9 years ago

    by Loosened Locks

    Whoa... o_o that was quite..um...twisted. Really high tolerance for abusive, masochistic tendancies maybe. The worst part is that I get this exactly. It's crazy how people change, ...what they change into...what 'love' changes them into...and all the damage that's been done to them - I really liked this alot, made me think about someone, yeah but my someone bailed...I hope you don't take advantage of this person forever, darlin'...You wouldn't want them to bail on you one day and never look back :/ Anyways, creative write - dark - Enticing somehow, you know...in a rotten way lol ? -Grins- I know. lol Awesome piece!

    5/5