Some times beauty need not expansive vocabulary, or graphic metaphors... It only needs honesty.
This was so beautiful, great job!

5/5
Jenn

Short but powerful !

Awwww.. suchha sweet one.. i loved it =).. such an awesome flow... n i can relate to it too.. its lovely... ur such an inspirational writer darling
a sure 5/5 =)

It is just amazing... It is very soothing and simple yet so impressive and you have charm in your words crishmerl:)
I enjoyed it^^