Comments : Papa's Sunflower

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I adore your writing, absolutely beautiful

  • 8 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Perhaps the most poignant poem I've read in a while. Really heart-breaking. And the note in the end added light to some parts which I didn't quite comprehend at first read. I can't say much, but you definitely made something beautiful out of a really sad event. Hm. I got an inspiration lol. Hope you don't mind ^.^
    Amazing write.
    -X

  • 8 years ago

    by Lioness

    This is so sad hun. Especially the last part. The image of saying goodbye to someone that has passed away always brings tears to my eyes.

    Awesome write

    x

  • 8 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Gees, this was incredibly sad, but naturally amazingingly written!! Your descriptions made me envision what you were talking about , which made me feel the sadness at the very moment of this event..

    Its really hard saying goodbye to a person, but sometimes even harder to say goodbye to a thing that means something special to us! Well described!

  • 8 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I can definitely feel the emotion, my heart sunk, so sad. :( but you definitely was able to write it in a way that was beautiful and touching. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Britt

    This poem breaks my heart. All of the beauty in the beginning and fond memories, and then the line about the tornado abducting your heart. I have goosebumps as I read this, ah it's so touching.

    I like how it can be both metaphoric and realistic.. I don't like that it IS one or the other of course, lol, but the your ability with poetry to allow your readers to make it their own just fascinates me. This is beautiful.

  • 8 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Some of your pieces are so beautiful, so beautiful it actually breaks my heart..

    p.s I admire your writing too <3.

    xoxo

  • 8 years ago

    by Meme

    Wooooow @_@

    It is just sooooo sad. But I really love how you expressed it all in your piece.

    Its always hard to say goodbye to those we love.