Perhaps the most poignant poem I've read in a while. Really heart-breaking. And the note in the end added light to some parts which I didn't quite comprehend at first read. I can't say much, but you definitely made something beautiful out of a really sad event. Hm. I got an inspiration lol. Hope you don't mind ^.^
I can definitely feel the emotion, my heart sunk, so sad. :( but you definitely was able to write it in a way that was beautiful and touching. 5/5
8 years ago
This poem breaks my heart. All of the beauty in the beginning and fond memories, and then the line about the tornado abducting your heart. I have goosebumps as I read this, ah it's so touching.
I like how it can be both metaphoric and realistic.. I don't like that it IS one or the other of course, lol, but the your ability with poetry to allow your readers to make it their own just fascinates me. This is beautiful.