I forgot how simple haikus seem to be, but they are so much harder to write than they are to read. Anyway, this is magnificent. I think it was a great example of a haiku. Thank you for writing.

~MRK

This is a cute short nature poem, good job:)

All the reader has to do is shut their eyes and there are those splashes of yellow dancing. Glad to see you writing.

Nice! I love a good haiku

I absolutely LOVE this!

You just reminded me of a visit that was incredibly fantastic. There were those tiny aligned yellowish things dancing with the freshing breeze and just painting an awesome imagery in my head!

I loved how you went simple. Awesome how we can imagine such stuff by reading such a simple haiku. Very well-done, Austin!

Oh mercy what a pretty Haiku! Just lovely!!

Simplistic as a haiku should be. Beautiful. Spring is very vibrant & lovely. Has to be one of the best seasons. Nice job!