I love the way your poem flows, and it holds a great deal of emotions especially when you describe this man as hiding inside, and trying to smooth over things in his life when his heart is so cracked. Really heartbreaking portrayals, like how he holds her image, that image of perfection close to him.

Last paragraph though "is" should be "his".

Very simple words but with a deeper meaning. I'm left to wonder what led him to believe he is this imperfect and doesn't have purpose.....it's like he's so far away from her that he has little left.

Great job :]

Hmnn...really heart breaking, sad, poem...
Anyway, Good piece...! Like it!
4/5