Comments : When I am Broken

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Very emotional poem i'm tearing up very touching i know how you feel very deep and sad poem i have a scar when i cut myself it never goes away once you cut the scar remains their forever i love the flow of this poem it's amazing and i like the title 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was such a simple yet striking piece. I loved everything about it, the raw emotions and that feeling of total despair. Don't give up :)

    Beautiful poem- heartbreaking descriptions, especially the part about being in the rain, because it's true, few can tell when someone is crying.

    Keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Cardwell, this is such an emotional piece. I enjoyed reading all of it, but the part that I enjoyed the most was the last stanza because it reminded me so much of myself. That is one of the reasons why I love the rain because of the privacy it gives you when you just want to cry from heartbreak. Very sad and emotional. Thank you for sharing this. 5/5