Sweet Nothings.

by Kitty Kurse   May 24, 2012


Rain drops on my ceiling,
You give me trickles of warm soft feelings.
Silk sheets stay cool while wrapping our bodies together,
Oh how I could lye in this bed forever;
With you.
Soft tickles as lips whisper sweet nothings upon my skin.
Butterflies and flushed cheeks; I know I'll be loving you till the end.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Awh you came up with a very sweet poem Kitty, this is so sensual and romantic. . .

    its such a lovely piece. . .

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I really find this piece sweet but that line at the end, would it be just me?

    My only problem with that line is the sound of till...
    Perhaps until would sound better.. Just a suggestions though.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lioness

    A sweet poem which shows the affection you have for this person.

    x

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I like everything about this poem,

    Except this line
    "I know I'll be loving you till the end."

    It sounded force to me, I got used to the rhymes and I didn't feel like it rhymed with skin..

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