Comments : Did You Feel Your Best

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    The heart often has good intension
    but for some reason or another we let
    the one down tht loves us the most
    So many questions, yet no answers
    By the time they realize its often too late
    Your gain, his loss
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Awwwww sweety this poem is soo emotional! and yes it hurts but one day you won't hurt anymore okay sweety? and i love this poem! 5/5 from me lol

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    Hmm it is cool poem so emotional
    but I think it is time to use punctuation it will make your poem flow better
    I like your word choice and how u repeated 1st line in every stanza and the style in 2nd line was cool too
    Overall great poem
    5/5 keep writing =)