'Come hither, as I showcase

the markings of an illusion,'

This and the stargazer bit are omg.

You are awesome!

Andrea, I loved this...nothing else to say...

You are amazing!!

I love the metaphor here:)

I love the poem, and I enjoyed reading it:)

Simply beautiful. Loved it!!!

I loved the images of the lips and tears. There was a hint of sensual feelings in this poem and I think it's from the words you've chosen to write with.

Awesome

x

Very nice poem!

Keep on writing ;)

5/5