Wow! This was absolutely amazing! I loved how you described the emotions here especially when someone doesn't realize their emotions and it suddenly hits them as if a light was shone through. The last stanza u had a small typo you put emotins instead of emotions. :p but this poem was well written and flawless and had great meaning and is going into my favs. :)

Wow! This was absolutely amazing! I loved how you described the emotions here especially when someone doesn't realize their emotions and it suddenly hits them as if a light was shone through. The last stanza u had a small typo you put emotins instead of emotions. :p but this poem was well written and flawless and had great meaning and is going into my favs. :)

Nicely penned.

Well-written. Just a few words from someone we love gives us hope. I think the rhymes flowed nicely. Great job. Keep writing (:
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Awesome