Comments : What i discovered today

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    By the time emotions about to set in
    it often is already a done deal
    I love the honesty in your poem

  • 11 years ago

    by VeinsofHate

    "I wish you were in love with me,
    it would simplify my life,
    and take away the craving,
    i still feel for the knife."

    My favorite part. I feel pain in this poem. I know what its like to be addicted to someone. it hurts deferentially when that person doesnt feel the same. Amazing poem!!!