Comments : Are you going nowhere?

  • 13 years ago

    by Cardwell

    This poem is great! It was well written, and the rhymes were unforced. I am not one who is good at writing the "Religious" poems, but you, sir, are a genius.

    Keep it up!

    -Cardwell

    • 13 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Cardwell, we have lots in common.
      I too came from a broken family, spent time in a Home for boy's and had an Aunt Rose. Cardboard fixed the holes in my shoes, didn't taste real butter until I was 19. I have walked with the Lord since I was 12. You also know him, he has given you a talent, you have not buried it in the ground!
      I see this in your poems and your honesty. Keep up the good work, God bless you my brother. Ken

  • 10 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely and a melodious rhythm to the piece - excellent.

  • 10 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks Ben.

  • 10 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Nice! short, good flow, lovely words... but I think it needs a bit more feeling into it instead of just description.
    Great write though!

  • 10 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks all!