Hmm this is fantastic poem
I wondered at first is it sad or love but as I completed reading I noticed that it was sad maybe about somebody u loved has died and u wrote that for him or it is somebody who left u and u thought that he would love u forever
So it is mixed feeling of sadness and love
Your tone was much more sad than it is for love so I suggest u change this to sad poems
Over all great read
5/5 keep writing =)

Beautifully written. Loved how your rhyming kept switching styles, wouldnt think such a uniqur style would work but it sure did!!
Good use of metaphor and great flow.
5/5

Nightmares twisting true become your fears
As the awakening of dreams nears
These things bring heartbreaks
That always last

so nicely written.....i loved this poem..
somethings sad thing from past always haunts your mind..u have clearly described it..
Keep it up^_^

This is really good, you are really good with rhymes and pouring down emotion.

I also like the format, it is really interesting. Way to go.