A good long write, words so very true.
I've never smoked in my life, as without doubt smoking kills. Just a matter of time with lots of pain along the way, but can the smoker see it? No!!!
I hope your poem will at least persuade some smokers to stop killing themselves.

Strong message about smoking - it does cause many health issues and also a financial issue. my father smokes 4 packs a day, so i know it all too well. it is an addiction that's hard to break. good poem 5/5

A good message and nicely put across which many should read.

Well done!

Heavier the stress, closer the end. Against all odds, victory abounds. As long as the heart beats, God cares. What a prayer, calmly worded. I pray your faith, names your victory.. Amen!!!

Heavier the stress, closer the end. Against all odds, victory abounds. As long as the heart beats, God cares. What a prayer, calmly worded. I pray your faith, names your victory.. Amen!!!

Thanks, you guys, MEANS alot!!!