Comments : Mi Amore

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Love is something so beautiful and
    amazing, more than words can describe
    often actions speak louder than words
    enjoyed reading

  • 11 years ago

    by Thomas

    Good lyrics except for the third stanza.
    It sounds a little bit weird.


  • 11 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Awh that was just so romantic. . . . the love was spilled out of this and turned into lovely flowers...

    this was a very lovely poem. . . and i think it would make a good song for these lyrics.... nice work on this it was so beautiful...its nice to read something so positive :D

    nice work 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Beautiful lyrics, great job. :) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Can I critique? Actually, I can't critique it. I found this poem so sweet and romantic, The repetition didn't bother me at all, and I simply love this piece.

  • 11 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Love, love, love. There's nothing as sweet and sore at the same time as love! She is lucky! ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Mom Pike

    I love your work. Your words flow perfectly, and you are a wonderful poet! You should write a book of poetry and I would be your first buyer!

  • 11 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Beautiful poem Cardwell. The flow was wonderful. It reminded me of poetry from a long time ago because of the flow, and the wording that you used .

    This whole thing is just beautiful

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Cardwell... this poem is very elegant and just flows like a powerful love song... I love the rhythmic tone.. it really is captivating..

  • 11 years ago

    by Alyssa Rianne

    I love this it flows so well!