Typos: Cavety is supposed to be cavity

This is a very deep poem, Rebecca. Your pain is evident here. The lines "the cavity in your chest, filled with swinging bricks and cement" are really strong lines. I can only imagine what that boy did to you :( I sympathize with you.

Excellent poem. Good expression of your emotions.
5/5

Your Poem made me feeling as if I were one of the poem's actors Rebecca. So deep. Keep on penning the same way Rebecca.