Wonderful ending! Good flow, this is really sweet,

Beautiful and so sweet! it has a really nice flow. 5/5

Just reading this brings a smile to the face. From
start to finish there was a smooth flow and each stanza has a warm touch of friendship to it..enjoyed it :)

Really simple, but I love your style, your poem was really good, and it flowed really well:)

I love the rhymes, keep up the good work.

It's hard to leave a longer comment, because I feel like everything is clearly express in the poem.

It's very tender and emotional. it's a beautiful piece of water color paints in my mind.
^.^ plz comment on some of mine.