Comments : The Universal Key

  • 11 years ago

    by nouriguess

    The ending is just breath-taking. Well-done, sir!

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    I agree with Noura, the ending was beyond breathtaking .. Its captivating. And what antitle you have there, Sir.
    Well, I am crazy about keys and I dont know why, and your title just grabbed my attention.

    Epic write as always ..

    • 11 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      Actually the poem, in progress, presented its ending in rough form some time back when I was looking at your key avatar.

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    Ohh really? Thats cool :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Beautiful Larry. Love this awesome love poem..You had me at the first line. I love every single word sentence and stanza.
    You rock at love poetry :) Good luck in the contest!

  • 11 years ago

    by nouriguess

    <3