Poetry helps us express feelings we simply cannot explain. You penned that so well here. I love it.

'Nature itself can' t explain my own feelings
So I let the bleeding pen do the art.'
^ Especially the last two lines. Beautiful.

Keep writing!
-X

The last two line stood out for me too.

Lovely piece.

The pen is mightier then the sword, the written word in any language has long been the source of so much inspiration, love, anger, rage etc.

Beautifully penned.

Thanx all..

This is amazing, especially the part
of this bleeding pen do the art
5/5

Like everyone else said the last two lines are beautiful... a wonderful write! :) 5/5

Very nice way of describing the writing proces of your poems. The pen bleedS blue on the paper really did it for me.

But as showed in my remark there are some minor grammatical mistakes.
But overall it is a really good piece

5/5