Flightless with wings

by neon sunset   Jun 7, 2012


The sky is a merry blue
the waves roll through and through
colored kites fly past me
the sun shines right through me
iridescent in the light
are my wings
i long to fly
i can not fly
i have wings, but no one can see me

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  • 3 years ago

    by yogi73

    Love the 'merry' start and lightness of the poem. Love the imagery of rolling waves. The sorrowful ending adds to the depth of the poem for a moment of self reflection

  • 11 years ago

    by yogi73

    I love this poem. it is going on my favs. The sorrow in the poem is touching and identifiable. You have masterfully placed a sky of merry blue into a well written prose of meloncholy overtones. thanks for sharing

  • 11 years ago

    by Chima

    Pin point accuracy that thought of nature of always please me i like the poetic devices

  • 11 years ago

    by Chima

    Pin point accuracy that thought of nature of always please me i like the poetic devices

    • 11 years ago

      by neon sunset

      Thank you for the comment. ^.^

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