*SCREAMS* Woooooo hooooo!!!! Damm it Meme you smacked that rhyme outta here!!!

The lines were (as you would say) cRaZy gOoD!!!

Every nictation from his eyes
opened a new chapter in mine.
And in his I read the colors of
coffee bean with a drop of sunshine.

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I loved all the stanza's but this is just perrrrrfect!!!!

For me, one of my favourite writes by you....maybe the best !!

Xx

Lovely flowing throughout the write. Very smooth till the end.

A really great piece! flowed very nicely... i really love the last stanza! great job! :) 5/5

Meme hun, you're amazing. This poem was awesome and the rhyming was sooooooooooo good because everything flowed well. I enjoyed this read. I love the idea of being unphotographable. For me I hate taking photos. I love the images in this write hun

x

Meme,

I have always admired your work, this touch of simplicity and sadness you have behind the words of every piece is unbelievable. This time, I wasn't surprised, I already knew (from the title) that I am going to love each bit. Your poetry has some innocence to it, especially that one bout a childhood memory. It was epic. I know I haven't commented on it yet, I will I promise. ;)

I love everything bout this piece, starting from the title till the rhymes and the atmosphere it had. The only thing I had a problem with was the ending, the way you wrote 'my unforgettable' between apostrophes and capitalised the 'm' and 'c' seemed not professional at all. That being said, it was my only critique and your poem is emotional, moving and melodic. Good job!

I love this piece. touched my heart.

This was a very pleasant read :)
the un-framable description is penned well and rhymed nicely. 5*

It was crisp dear, a whole in itself i am not much of a admirer but this one is going into my favorite 5/5