Comments : Bourgeoisie

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    People often pretend to be something
    they are not
    eventually they fall off their high horse
    it is only a matter of time
    well written

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    "So go life of your daddy's account"
    ^life of should say "live off" i believe.

    other than that, great poem! people think that money is all they need to be happy in life, when in reality the rich are usually the ones who are the most lonely and have the most effed up problems, lol.
    this poem is raw and tells your feelings straight up, good job! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Nice write.

    My father is too rich, he could buy himself whatever he wants to. Yet, I couldn't like him any bit, not even once in my life. I love simplicity, honesty and pureness that I guess stopped existing.

    If only you would remove the cursing words and place this under life section or something, I would've been able to nominate.

    Nevertheless, good write.

  • 11 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Happy that you listened :)
    Nominated next week.