by Kitty Kurse
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I don't really catch what the subject is.. and the first line has four syllables not five, perhaps add in another word or something. I like the concept thought. The emotion could have been more though.. |
by East Poetry
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Six feet below |
by Darren
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I think it is the speaking part that confuses people, How about spoken? |
by Karla
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Amazing! |