So sad, so sweet :( Lovely rhyming 5/5

mandy

Beautiful piece.Love is attitude more than words and when you stay it shows that love prevails despite everything

Wonderfully penned! A brilliant write.

A stunning piece Peter... :)

Your poems always touch my heart, and this one did deeply. I feel your sincere love for this person... and your hurt. You are such a swell guy and Im sure love will come around again for you :)

Well written and expressed Peter! ~ Lee :)

Love this! :) Awesome job! Beautiful.

This poem is a true master piece. Nice good peter

You and me would be forever
the times you cried 'Leave you?, Never!'
But I will keep my promise, it's true
I will always, always be here, for you ..

^^
The heart has a will of it's own, doesn't it, Peter?

You do have friends you can open up your heart to and trust them with all you have, at least one:)

Well done, it is a good thing you are able to release this all on paper.

5/5 Ingrid

Ah, Peter, another wonderful poem from you. Going through your work is always a pleasure; I'm never let down. Love and sadness permeate this piece.
Well done and I hope you are well,
Ben