Woooow you're strong really strong man:)
Im so sad that my votes are done, promise you nominated next week:)

I am deep for I am a man
not to hide what I feel,
I cry, I laugh, I bap and I fart
Yes, I am deep
^^^
hahahaha this part made me laugh:)

I love it I really do, great job Paul:)

Another poem well written Paul
I can see from your writings you are a
very strong man, willing to accept things
the way they are, and still striving for
a better future to come

I really enjoy reading your poem, Paul. This is really amazing and some parts are funny. Well, as I've knew you have a sense of humor and you applied it here...great piece.
5/5
~C

Yup, I agree life can be a living hell but there is nothing else we can do but to accept who we are as we are and to try to be good, even though, not many do.

Well, written piece.

I like that you know who you are. That's the impression I got from this piece.

Its vry intense

Oh it can be hard to live in a place that we love so much, a place that is our home and there are certain things going on that we wish weren't. Where people are being hurt or dying, it gets me angry and this poem broke my heart but you wrote it so well.

Awesome poem

x

Paul Gondwe,

I am living in a place where war never stops. Still Syria means the world to me, and I can never imagine myself living away from it. I can tell how hard it feels when you see your beloved ones suffering, even if countries. It's like...you really can do nothing about it but you try anyway. It is sad. So sad.

I am sorry for your loss, I don't know Daniel nor Alex nor how you lost them but I'm sorry. It feels like this poem was meant to let out your emotions, those suppressed emotions. And you did a great job. :)

Bukowski said it,

"It's so easy to be a poet and so hard to be a man."

again, solid.

Very nice:)