Comments : My Father....

  • 8 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Hi Owlin,

    What a fantastic dedication and heartfelt write.


    You let me be myself, finding out my owm mistakes...

    ^m needs to be changed back to n.

    Other then that it was spectacular!

  • 8 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Beautifully expressed poem.
    Simply elegant.
    Loved it all the way.

    all the best and take care

  • 8 years ago


    Truly a lovely and heartfelt poem. Bought a tear to my eye especially the last line..

    'And as long as life gives us breath, I will, until the end.'

    This line hit me like a 'ton of bricks.'
    A truly great piece of writing.

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A sweet and lovely dedication to your father!
    Fathers do a great deal for his children and it takes us kids some time to see it. A nice father's day poem that holds love, respect and admiration..beautifully penned!