My grave

by sana   Jun 17, 2012


Don't cry don't regret on my grave
I have died proudly because I'm brave
not brave in life but in your mind
I'm sad about what i find
strong winds brought me
passed memories u don't see
all my dreams to grave came in
oh unfaithful I have never here been

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  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Good effort Sana

    just a few typos which you expect from somebody writing in another language which I couldn't do.

    "I'm died proudly because I'm brave"

    should be either "I've died or I'm dead"

    like the emotion in this.

    regards

    • 11 years ago

      by sana

      Thanks for your comment

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