Wow Andrea,,,, this brought me to tons of beams of hope in the end though it somehow made me feel sad. I hope you always keep on running , keep on running, with him, in dreams and reality....

hey, why don't you invite him to the club?!

Awwwwwwwww, I love this, I can sense your huge love towards him. Beautiful piece:)

Wish you both all the best<3

Andrea, this is a beautiful piece of writing.

I can feel your feelings good poem

Oh dear. Look in the mirror, Andrea, look in it sooo deep. Do never be afraid of anything. Share your feelings, love and sadness with him. Live each day in this life. My heart goes ut for you, sweetheart. :( Such a sweet write.

Nice one, reliving old memories is so statisfying but it's not living.
One day we must face our reality and overcome it. But with a person that loves you that shouldn't be a problem.

5/5

I was a judge and this was my comment:

I did love the romantic tone in this piece, yet, when I finished I wanted more. More feeling, more desire...however, I was glad since you wrote a short piece you chose words that still drew me in and captivated me. . Nicely done :)

Oh, how we all want to run away from reality sometimes and return to the past with no worries.

Love, hope, and faith will pull you through and I'm glad you are cherishing every moment you can. <3