Comments : Birth Certificate

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    I love the way you bring the planets, the sun, and heavens into this magical piece! Your poetry shines like a star...no not just any star- YOU are the North star :) Awesome write as always Karla
    Lostlove~

  • 11 years ago

    by Lioness

    Awesome write beautiful!

    I lovvvve the images of the solar system in this poem. I used to love watching the stars at night and reading about them when I was younger. I found something magical about it as I do about this poem.

    Wonderful.

    x

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Written, Karla!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Omar

    Awesome. This is a wonderful peom. Like the fact that you brought the solar system into this poem. Keep it up