Comments : Token

  • 13 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Nicely written, well expressed. Very good write

  • 13 years ago

    by Ciera

    Thank you

  • 13 years ago

    by Omar

    Great poem. I could actually feel the flow of the poem. Nice job, keep it up.

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    It was a really good piece probley could of took it further but it is a really good write

    5/5

    Tony