by Saerelune
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            You truly know how to write sensual poetry, making use of glamorous words which could easily turn off a reader, though with your poetry, it works. I guess the only line where it became a little bit too much for me, was this one: "mimicries of a supernova escaping merlot lips." Maybe because the rhythm of the previous line made it seem like the stanza would end there, and with the mouthful of words in the line I pointed out, it seemed out of place.   | 
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 Thank you for the kind words! And I definitely agree about that one line, I am removing it. Reading over the piece again with fresh eyes, it does seem long winded and out of place. Cheers! :)  | 
by Omar
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 Wow, just a amazing poem. Love your work. :)  | 
by Karla
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 Stellar piece. Always a pleasure to read your poems.  | 
by Unrequited
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            Your talent seems to have no end.The images you create are stunning...  |