Comments : Daddy

  • 13 years ago

    by karyssa smith

    Very well written. I love how you didn't need to explain why "Daddy" got taken away, and how she still loved him no matter what he did.

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Daddies and uncles can cause immense problems.

  • 12 years ago

    by Terry Hume

    I hate the subject matter as its very upsetting. The poem is disturbing and I think its supposed to be disturbing. Its a delicate balance of repulsiveness and reality. Straight forward and I feel your desperation in it. Keep writing. Good job.