Comments : The Weight to Find You

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    Nice poem, Project number one? I have heard that before somewhere...

    This was a lovely poem, and interesting to see that you have all the answers for your friend. that's sweet.

    • 13 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      :P Thank you!!!........project number one?, not sure where you read it from but it came into my head when i was writing the poem as I work on my projects lol :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Answers found come from what you seek. The right one will keep you from pain. Locate your hold, though choice is vast. Uncertainty defined, crowns neck.

  • 13 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    I'm confused about the title!
    Is it 'The weight to find you' or
    'The way to find you'?

    • 13 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Hehe......nope its the weight to find you, at the time i knew what the meaning for it was but my brains not functioning well right now to explain it oO

      But thank you for viewing my poem :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Krysten

    I very much liked this one, a wonderful job and captivatingly written. :) a poem that speaks from the heart 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I didnt understand this one. but i did get the point that when you find someone you like you dont give up. therefore good point, i too believe in that