Comments : Omen of sin.

  • 11 years ago

    by Karla

    Loved the flow Janis. Amazing piece.

  • 11 years ago

    by Watercolourz

    Well you turned my quote into a poem so the credit is yours. Amazing stuff as always mate.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Powerful poem Janis...great write :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This left me sad, it reads like an ongoing ride through hell, with death at the end of it.

    Well done on this grim piece,

    5/5 Ingrid