Lol it sounds like a rap bt its awesome 5/5

This is sad and full of emotion.

Still filled with great emotion for this girl, if only she knew; this is good too, keep it uppp!

Your poems are very heart felt and beautiful keep writing.

This shows that you are willing to do anything for her, even make yourself unhappy just to make her happy... great job.

Keep writing! :)

This was so beautiful. 5/5 great job.

Good job Omar. 4/5

A beautiful write.
It flowed and rhymed really well.

Corrections:

In the last stanza:
'relize' should be 'realize'

Also, 'i' should be 'I'

Fantastic job. 5/5

**I will post this in the other author's profile too.

^^ I cannot find the 'Reyna' you speak of - perhaps a direct link? OR add that you have collaborated with this person in the box provided when you sumbit/edit poems?