Awe. Sweet with a dreamy feel. Liked the mix of rhyme here and the imagery was really fantastic too. I read it a few times and thought maybe just maybe to add COME as the first word in your poem IDK why really lol but just a suggestion :) Happy anniversay you two.
Lostlove.

So seductive and sweet........love the line 'meet me on the lawn, you will know what to do, shows the simplicity of love-close and part of nature with someone you trust............lying on the grass .

Ahhh wonderful sighs :-)) and big smiles to :-))

This is soo you syrup, just penned as effortlessly as a leave on the wind, the images we're so vivid and clear, and you kniw how i love rhymes and that mixin it up made it extra special.

I raise a glass to you and jim have a fantastic anniversary BIG BIG Loves xx

Whenever you write about love, my heart dances naked.

I love you, Andrea :)

Andrea,

It is going to be weird going up against you in the challenge since you are an amazing writer and an inspiration.

Firstly I love poems that describe a date or time and place. I feel that it becomes more personal to the writer and also makes the reader wonder what is special about that date before even reading the poem. In my mind I thought it may have had something to do with your hubby which I thought was nice. I hadn't paid attention to the background colour when reading (sometimes that happens) and then I read your note in the end which is beautiful. Congratulations on your anniversary :">

I like that you have mixed the rhyming schemes on this poem. It is like having a whole bunch of poems rolled into one. I love the images you have set for us. The way you talk just shows us how special this day is for you as well as how special your hubby is to you, and that is also what makes it personal.

I completely enjoyed the read. It was awesome.

x

'Whenever you write about love, my heart dances naked.'

I cannot begin to imagine, hahaha! :P

Andrea,

I really love this poem. I think that James must stop challenging you, ha? Haha. I wish you guys spend a life full of love and laughter. I began now to feel what it's like to fall in love, sigh, haha. I don't know if it has passed but I wish you have/had a very lovely one with so much romance and so much gifts and grnaddaughters, grandsons all over the place, haha!

I seriously wish you all the best, lovely Tree. :)

Pouring true love in a poem:)
Love it, great job

This is so breathy and beautiful!