Here are my comments.

The last sentence of the first stanza - "Washing all tins and plates for any stain."

^^I think the last word stain should be made plural.

The second sentence of the second stanza - "At the clear skies there are not a cloud in sight."

^^Suggest replacement of the word "At" with "In" as the structure appears a little odd right now.

Just my thoughts. Nice write!

I loved the content of this piece though the rhyming felt forced at times but i looked through that. Amazing work.

Hi Paul
Thanks for your comments, and you might be right about the rhymes

Old mills are romance in short terms?