Oh i freaking LOVE THIS!!!!

Poop is supposed to be good luck isnt it lol...i never understood that lol

Wonderfully penned syrup :-)

:) Made me smile...

Really, this is a really nicely penned piece, gently humorous, and simply amazing

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This is sooooo gooood!! :)

Cockroaches lurked, making love in my bed
Great! Nicely penned. I think we have to give a chance for cockroaches to make their own love but not on your bed, ha ha ha. provided, If you were to speak of a month so true it would be August (just joking my friend). I really enjoyed the reading. Thank you.

Brilliant and funny but ewwwwwwwwwwwwww @ this part cockroaches lurked, making love in my bed

lol Oh I just felt my skin go WTF lol

My body shook just reading that part... LOVE THE RHYMING, flawless.

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I usually shy away from the 'funny poems' section of this site, but I am so glad I read this :)
I love how you always manage to inject your pieces with a bit of nature here and there. The parts with the mockingbird and cockroaches made me smile.
Brilliant. I love this piece!