This is sad .....sigh....beautifully written as always xx

Very true feelings reflects in this poem.. sadness is there. i can feel. this is sometime what we express ourselves in our writing.. very good poem.. i love idea.. great poem once again my friend..

It's simple yet very effective

Here I am still writing in
the language you speak
but it seems that you
became a foreigner to
Every word

This was my favourite stanza I love how you set the image of someone who obviously speaks English but surely must be ignoring you acting like he's cant speak a word .

I think this is a true emotional write that we could all relate to ... We all right about people close to us and sometime it feels as there's nothing to write about . But as we know inspiration is everywhere great write :)

I am sorry I was out.:(

Why do I think your poetry is simply breathtaking? Perhaps, it's in the style, the story...or perhaps because I know you. I will comment later, I am still wearing my shoes :P

Allot of sadness coming from the words you have scribed, very emotional.

I love the concept of the poem, a message to a friend that does not seem to care anymore.

Uhhh, what I guess I am trying to say is .... ugh well, I know I was wrong for not coming by more....eeerrrr, sorry =( Forgive me, pretty please!

I love this! There's a deeper meaning than just this person reading your poetry. It's about them reading you as a person, getting to know you and feeling with you.

I love that about this poem hun. I love the depth of the words and the meaning behind it that I felt.

Awesome

x

This is beyond deep... adding this to my favorites. :)

One of the hardest things in life is moving on from what you once had, you once shared. You are stuck in the same emotions yet the other person has already moved on and all you want to do is hit rewind back to the time when they felt the same way about you as you did them. You just want it all back.

I don't think I have a favorite line, they are all just ... amazing.

Well..dnt knw bout othrs..bt i cant say no to uor poetry..
I wont bcm foreigner evr..