Comments : Just Another Dream

  • 8 years ago

    by Jawwad Zafar

    Excellent work..
    Another masterpiece :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Khalid

    Stellar my friend! I really enjoyed reading.
    Just I have some points if you wish to take into account
    (i) Line 4 you said 'I can do anything without'. Well I suggest either you should say 'can't do anything' or 'can do something'.
    (ii) You said 'to find ht nowhere'. What do you mean by 'ht'.
    (iii) 'seven letter' should be 'seven-letter'.
    Anyway, this is my opinion for you and you can do your own but just trying to help.
    Thank you.
    <<<Khalid>>>