Angel Does Exists

by chris   Jul 7, 2012


They say angel's don't exist,
My whole life it made me believe
Until I met someone 4 months ago
At, first I thought she's just an ordinary girl
With an extraordinary beauty,
A powerful attitude,
A personified character,
A smile that can turn a hurricane into a sunset
And a heart that designed to be loved..
As days passed by
Weeks runs by
And months goes by
This girl did something to me,
An unexplainable phenomenon
Ridiculously speaking,
she didn't do anything
A single stare at her pictures,
Turned my heart from stone to sand
Her eyes is like a fire
That made my stoned heart melt
Even on a cold winter night it burns
On my lonely sleep
She appears in my head
White dress, with a ponytails on her hair
And a wings owned by an angel
How could it be a reality
That god let one of his angel
Falls down from the sky
And made my life like heaven
I pray to god and says
"sorry for stealing your angel"
He might throw me in hell for such crime
But I won't regret
Coz the day we met
I'm completely made
No storm can bring me down
No flood can make me drowned
No earthquake can shake me down to the ground
Even an Armageddon wouldn't matter
As long as I have my angel by my side
I'm in paradise...

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  • The content of this is really fantastic. Also, completely relatable.

    You have managed to describe your love for this girl without actually saying the words - nicely done!

    My only critique would be:
    Watch your grammar. There are some minor errors throughout.

    One other thing;
    Your title: I think it would sound better if it read: Angels Do Exist.
    Your choice though, obviously.

    Great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Coco

    I absolutely love this, I too have had someone come into my life like this, and I hope we stay like this.

    • 12 years ago

      by chris

      Thanks for a wonderful comments guys :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Illusion

    Lovely poem...

  • 12 years ago

    by Illusion

    Lovely poem...

  • 12 years ago

    by chris

    Thanks a lot.. really appreciate it