Comments : Dive

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    The best poem is "Few words with multiple hits"! Powerful piece my friend! I enjoyed the reading.

  • 11 years ago

    by Thomas

    Sometimes the little things can hurt the most.

    Powerful poetry you got here ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Awesome write as usual, great job:)

  • 11 years ago

    by mandy

    "Where those miniscule words are the fire"

    -Loved this line. I think it reflects how important the small things in life are.

    Beautiful, very moving. 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh the images in this! It saddened me that on such a beautiful night that you had fallen. Oh that broke my heart :(

    Awesome write though.

    x