I love the details of this poem. It allowed me to imagine your words. good job.

I love this Andrea...so sensual and nice...I love the title and the wording. I love the imagery here too.

Really well done.

Sorry. Double post...

I did love this...

Hahahhaha Andrea I can't even comment properly because I'm so distracted by this figure!! You are so crazy! Shape poetry is awesome though and I love how erotic this piece is, yet not written by just an ordinary lady getting pleasure, written by a poet with beautiful wording. LOVED this lol

2 second ago, I read Tara's latest, and I felt I was in heaven.

Now, I have read this, and I am still in heaven.

You ladies are awesome.

Andrea, this is a Perfect write :D

Awesome, Awesome.

But where are the balls? lol

Oh this is beautiful and sensual I LOVE IT!!!

Very enjoyable read! It does look like a penis lo

LOL - not here :P

HAHAHAHA. Andrea and Liz, you guys are freakin' funny. I didn't guess the shape at first but I knew it must be something dirty, lol. I still remember your Naughty Noodles challenge and how we freaked out! I love you Andrea, hahahahaa.