by Omar
Love this poem. |
I felt such a deep connection with this poem. They say home is where the heart is but, just because it beats there doesn't mean it's where you belong. I loved the simplicity of your words as well as the rhyme. Truly spoke to me. |
I appreciate your comment. Thank you. |
by Marvellous
Life is an ultimate question. That demands one answer from all. Our job is to go discover. That every breath may recover. Where there's a need, there's an answer. Answer is report of a find. Every need must resume with thorn. See the end, and strive for the fun. End of a matter spells victory. But it takes some time to get there. Patience is key to survival. At the fullness of time, God gives. |
Nice job there on the rhyming thing. Ive always loved rhymes. Pretty sad this one, I believe this is your first poem here, anyways, like I said its nice and I enjoyed it. Hope to see more from you. :) |