This is such a lovely poem you have written up here.........its so wnoderful when someone comes into your life and suddnly makes everything much better huh? I know that feeling very well :))

anguished pain that made me derary,
^^I think that you mean "deary" in this line

You were my Prince in shining armer
and "armor" in this line

this really wasw an uplifintg love poem, filled with such sweetness and appreciation.. Love itt :))

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Aww what a lovely poem. Such a sweet relationship described with such beautiful words and flow.

Thanks for sharing this.

The title made me think about "love at first sight" but this one is about from the first time we met we, It was love.

It's well written, and for an instance, the poem to me sounded like a song. It's sweet.

Beautiful and heartfelt poem. I loved reading it. Warmed me up!

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Very nice work :) I loved the way you used metaphores in your writing to show your thoughts

My favorite lines: Passionate fire set ablaze far into my soul;
Dried roses, we dance a wonderful lullaby;
anguished pain that made me dreary,
Weary that no one could save my vanishing sanity

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You sure have your way with words.beautiful write