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by Wicked Ways
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Hmm I'm sure a hauki goes be 5 7 5 |
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by L
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I think you have 7,7,6 syllables. |
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by Baby Rainbow
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This is very true. I think the haiku can be slightly altered in syllables. I have seen this done many times in examples where I have studied them for a writing group. I think most of forms of writing are sometimes tweaked a bit and in my opinion that is ok as long as you can pull it off, which I believe you have done. |
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