Comments : A New Day (Kimo)

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is beautiful... New day... new sunrise... makes me vision a purplish orange sun, while sipping coffee.... love this form... very pretty piece!

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Such a lovely picture this Haiku has formed in my mind! An interesting form and you have used it perfectly to describe the start of a day..excellent!

  • 9 years ago

    by L

    I love this post haiku, the description and the imaginary of starting a new day while the waves touches the rocks is beautiful.


  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Wow Steven!!! You know so many formats, you are a real poetry lover!

    I loved the tranquil mood in which this little poem left me. Such peace can be found in simple scenes like you just painted it.

    Really well done, my friend,

    5/5 Ingrid