Comments : Lapis Skies (Rispetto).

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This form is elegant... and very rich in beauty of nature.... I got lost in all its glory...

    One thing I would like to ask: Second stanza; first line, you have "of the" written twice... did you mean to write it that way for a repetitious feeling?

    In my opinion, this is a gorgeous nature formed piece and one I feel deserves to be highlighted!

    • 9 years ago

      by Steven Beesley

      ^^^I am glad you caught the bug, don't know what happened but seems a gremlin crept in when transferring text to site?

      Thanks for your comments.

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    You are very welcome~ and those nasty gremlins are evil :-)

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Liked the title and liked how you used to describe natures everlasting skies! This form is indeed an elegant one..well penned!

  • 9 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Amazing...great choice of words & very unique form. Glad that i read it.

    all the best and take care