Khalid! I didn't know this was your write in the contest...sooooo creative you used all the p words in one poem!! Loved it!!

Great write, Khalid! :)

This poem reminds me of Halloween
children all dressed up, having fun
carving the pumpkins. beautiful write
Khalid

Like Dagmar said, this reminds me of Halloween. Kids dressed up as pirates and ghosts, and prince/princesses... all carving pumpkins at their party. I loved how you used all the "P" words from the contest.

Great write.

I like how this poem has an ironic twisted reality to it. I can see how things relate to each other in the mind of a child and innocence is the school of thought that imagination belongs too... Sometimes reality is more beautiful that way.